There are days when only your voice
can carry my troubles into safety.
I’m reminded of the eras we shared
it all comes back to me
in flashes,
the waves we rode,
the courts we jested,
the letters we sent,
the cab rides
we shared,
the way you told me
‘the only way to love is full of abandon
recklessness, don’t you know silly girl
that logic is useless
and reason is full of doubt’
Then somehow my words get trapped
in your mind
and my soul is no longer mine
i shall search for my lost self
and find that little girl
inside. other times i marvel
how you have taken my wonder
and transformed it
into poetic riptides.
The visuals of goddesses
of the past and present,
my Virgo twin
I should be loving you right now
but you send me your bullets
as I welcome them.
hit me with your best lines
i’m living the lie
waiting for the dream
It’s coming straight from California
my book of poetry will be in your hand
and nothing will make sense
anymore.
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my “like” button is broken…this is lovely!
so does this mean you love it? lol
yes, that’s what it means :-), my buttons working again today, yay!
woah! this is great, so speaks to that turmoil of love and lovers – it comes and it ….. g o e s… beautiful!
thank you Sandy for understanding this turmoil. x
Beautiful and inspiring! 😀
thank you moon, it’s a full moon today, xx appreciate your comment.
Chrissy
Yes indeed!! 🙂 you are welcome Chrissy!
My heart is swelling! <3
oh thank you, now you’re making mine swell…xx
This is really lovely and transports you to a beautiful world
so happy you came along for the ride
Me too!♡
Great , great piece
There’s to much here
Lots of images
As always Sheldon
so glad you enjoyed that piece. always love to read your comments x thank you
Wow!!
love that reaction. thank you Dustin x
I….LOVE…THIS….SO….MUCH….❤
ERIC…THANK…YOU for sharing means so much to me. much love to you xx
Love to you too, Poetess. ♡
poetic riptides. Another good one. Does it always flow so easy for you?
yes, could be a gift or a curse – still pondering. thank you x
Gift in your case. Not trying to put pressure on your for your next post. I am sure it will be a gem.
i do great under pressure
Hahaha. I didn’t mean it as a challenge. I have no doubt you excel under pressure.
i’m not that into prompts and writing challenges but i adore them on Instagram, for some reason trying to capture 5 words in a story is a challenge more than writing a whole poem. thank you anyway!
5 words??? Wow that would be more difficult. I am sure you are up to the task.
5 words: We are the same soul
Nice
Thank you
I love this so much. I feel that ache and you make it beautiful.
thank you xx so glad you read me and send me all these love messages, they mean the world to me.
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this is gorgeous, like everything you write… xo
thank you my beautiful friend. humbled over and over again xx
thank YOU!