Making Love vs Fucking

If you want to know the truth

I think you meant to make love to me

but your body wanted to fuck.

You started off with honey black kisses

and lover with dark hearts

need only fucking

to drive away the making love.

You just say making love

to appease the romantic in me

the truth is you are just

another man ready to fuck

with his body full

and his mind on my ass.

It’s fine

honestly, I am guilty

of fucking myself

and making love is so far

from my mind

that I left the rose petals

in my book.

If you want to make love

let’s talk about it

if you want to fuck

let’s be silent.

I went in circles

from one extreme to the other

but we all know

fucking and making love

have fine lines in the sand

and only a few know

the difference.

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52 thoughts on “Making Love vs Fucking

      1. Hi, well I suppose that when I write I have more words up my sleeve, but sometimes I feel the need to write and respond and other times the answer is within you. I really don’t have any answers, especially when it comes to my poem, but I am particularly glad that this poem has made so many ponder. Thank you for the compliment and for reading my poem!

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    1. thank you my friend! if I don’t finish my poem with a punch what’s the point. when i was in university i had a professor who said when you start teaching a class ( i was doing my stage as a high school teacher then) she said you have to start each class with a hook, like a journalist does and end it the same way to leave the kids excited to come back. I honestly applied that to my poems as well. πŸ™‚

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    1. I am so thrilled so many people connected to this poem, honestly I just wrote it like that because I was inspired by another blogger after a comment! All about the word “fuck” and its meaning but I took it to another level, which is something I can’t control when I write, it’s like I’m being possessed by another entity…

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  2. Such an interesting view of one vs. the other! Interesting comment above – can’t it be both? Seems to me the best is a blend of making love at the start and finish, with passion, lust and “fucking” in the middle. Loved the lines – “fine lines in the sand

    and only a few know

    the difference.
    So well said!! Excellent! Thanks for coming to visit. Love to meet new friends! Come again?

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