If you want to know the truth
I think you meant to make love to me
but your body wanted to fuck.
You started off with honey black kisses
and lover with dark hearts
need only fucking
to drive away the making love.
You just say making love
to appease the romantic in me
the truth is you are just
another man ready to fuck
with his body full
and his mind on my ass.
It’s fine
honestly, I am guilty
of fucking myself
and making love is so far
from my mind
that I left the rose petals
in my book.
If you want to make love
let’s talk about it
if you want to fuck
let’s be silent.
I went in circles
from one extreme to the other
but we all know
fucking and making love
have fine lines in the sand
and only a few know
the difference.
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Although I don’t some, I feel that I should have one right now. And pardon me for reading it several times. 😍
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hahaha perfect! so glad you did, have a great day :))
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You as well, Chrissy. 🙂
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I was so flustered, that I said *some* instead of *smoke*. Ouch.
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Lmao!
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“If you want to make love
let’s talk about it
if you want to fuck
let’s be silent.” (Pen!!!)
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thank you!
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just tweeted it lol
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Thank you!
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I love the “I left the rose petals in my book” line! They both have their place in life, don’t they?
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yes, they do, I thank you for telling me 🙂
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It’s possible to do both at the same time, I think.
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depends
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Just about everything depends. I admit it’s usually one or the other, but it’s possible to do both.
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I am not agreeing or disagreeing
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Well said
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😊
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You’re a woman of few uncalculated words. That’s okay. Words are dangerous. But you’re good with them.
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Hi, well I suppose that when I write I have more words up my sleeve, but sometimes I feel the need to write and respond and other times the answer is within you. I really don’t have any answers, especially when it comes to my poem, but I am particularly glad that this poem has made so many ponder. Thank you for the compliment and for reading my poem!
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Riveting as always and this last image; ‘but we all know
fucking and making love
have fine lines in the sand
and only a few know
the difference’ is the killer!!! Xx
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thank you my friend! if I don’t finish my poem with a punch what’s the point. when i was in university i had a professor who said when you start teaching a class ( i was doing my stage as a high school teacher then) she said you have to start each class with a hook, like a journalist does and end it the same way to leave the kids excited to come back. I honestly applied that to my poems as well. 🙂
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Fucking and making love, two extreme sided but sometimes, the same coin.Amazing poem which is rebellious and this makes its beauty.
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I am so thrilled so many people connected to this poem, honestly I just wrote it like that because I was inspired by another blogger after a comment! All about the word “fuck” and its meaning but I took it to another level, which is something I can’t control when I write, it’s like I’m being possessed by another entity…
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The mark of a sensational writer, totally free:)
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you are awesome! thank you Vishal:) have a great day!
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Nice post! Right now, I wouldn’t give a damn what the difference was, as long as I got some. Just sayin’…
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lmao 🙂
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thank you for sharing 🙂
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Such an interesting view of one vs. the other! Interesting comment above – can’t it be both? Seems to me the best is a blend of making love at the start and finish, with passion, lust and “fucking” in the middle. Loved the lines – “fine lines in the sand
and only a few know
the difference.
So well said!! Excellent! Thanks for coming to visit. Love to meet new friends! Come again?
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Hi, thanks for the comment:) sure I will visit 🙏🏼
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Love this. Fucking excellent…since fucking is excellent lol
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thank you lol
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most fucking welcome 😀
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Hey if you wanna submit something to Dark Chaos feel free 😀
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I will check out your blog! thanks so much
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Fucking sweet 😀
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cool
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It can be as fucking dark as you want it
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Perfect does it have to be unpublished
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Fuck no…. bring it… just let me know where it was before
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can you leave link here I clicked on yours and does not exist
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fuck… that’s weird… it’s http://www.darkchaos96.wordpress.com
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followed
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fuck yes…. thanks…. yeah I changed the address to this one….maybe that’s what was fucked up
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yup got it
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sweet
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ok just changed it … thx for letting me know
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were you ever a fan of Murderdolls? lol
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you have thenewsbsurdistblog.wordpress.com as a link now
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yeah…. that’s fucked…. i’ll go check it out see what’s wrong
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