Making Love vs Fucking

If you want to know the truth

I think you meant to make love to me

but your body wanted to fuck.

You started off with honey black kisses

and lover with dark hearts

need only fucking

to drive away the making love.

You just say making love

to appease the romantic in me

the truth is you are just

another man ready to fuck

with his body full

and his mind on my ass.

It’s fine

honestly, I am guilty

of fucking myself

and making love is so far

from my mind

that I left the rose petals

in my book.

If you want to make love

let’s talk about it

if you want to fuck

let’s be silent.

I went in circles

from one extreme to the other

but we all know

fucking and making love

have fine lines in the sand

and only a few know

the difference.

52 comments

  1. The V Pub · May 10, 2017

    Although I don’t some, I feel that I should have one right now. And pardon me for reading it several times. ๐Ÿ˜

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  2. Chrissy · May 10, 2017

    Lmao!

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  3. Ricardo Sexton · May 10, 2017

    “If you want to make love
    letโ€™s talk about it
    if you want to fuck
    letโ€™s be silent.” (Pen!!!)

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  5. eurobrat · May 11, 2017

    I love the “I left the rose petals in my book” line! They both have their place in life, don’t they?

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  6. Ward Clever · May 11, 2017

    It’s possible to do both at the same time, I think.

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    • Chrissy · May 11, 2017

      depends

      Liked by 1 person

      • Ward Clever · May 11, 2017

        Just about everything depends. I admit it’s usually one or the other, but it’s possible to do both.

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      • Chrissy · May 11, 2017

        I am not agreeing or disagreeing

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      • Ward Clever · May 11, 2017

        Well said

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      • Chrissy · May 11, 2017

        ๐Ÿ˜Š

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      • Ward Clever · May 11, 2017

        You’re a woman of few uncalculated words. That’s okay. Words are dangerous. But you’re good with them.

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      • Chrissy · May 11, 2017

        Hi, well I suppose that when I write I have more words up my sleeve, but sometimes I feel the need to write and respond and other times the answer is within you. I really don’t have any answers, especially when it comes to my poem, but I am particularly glad that this poem has made so many ponder. Thank you for the compliment and for reading my poem!

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  7. deuxiemepeau · May 11, 2017

    Riveting as always and this last image; ‘but we all know
    fucking and making love
    have fine lines in the sand
    and only a few know
    the difference’ is the killer!!! Xx

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    • Chrissy · May 11, 2017

      thank you my friend! if I don’t finish my poem with a punch what’s the point. when i was in university i had a professor who said when you start teaching a class ( i was doing my stage as a high school teacher then) she said you have to start each class with a hook, like a journalist does and end it the same way to leave the kids excited to come back. I honestly applied that to my poems as well. ๐Ÿ™‚

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  8. vishalbheeroo · May 11, 2017

    Fucking and making love, two extreme sided but sometimes, the same coin.Amazing poem which is rebellious and this makes its beauty.

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    • Chrissy · May 11, 2017

      I am so thrilled so many people connected to this poem, honestly I just wrote it like that because I was inspired by another blogger after a comment! All about the word “fuck” and its meaning but I took it to another level, which is something I can’t control when I write, it’s like I’m being possessed by another entity…

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  9. nkdwhtguy · May 11, 2017

    Nice post! Right now, I wouldn’t give a damn what the difference was, as long as I got some. Just sayin’…

    Liked by 1 person

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  11. thereluctantpoet · May 25, 2017

    Such an interesting view of one vs. the other! Interesting comment above – can’t it be both? Seems to me the best is a blend of making love at the start and finish, with passion, lust and “fucking” in the middle. Loved the lines – “fine lines in the sand

    and only a few know

    the difference.
    So well said!! Excellent! Thanks for coming to visit. Love to meet new friends! Come again?

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    • Chrissy · May 25, 2017

      Hi, thanks for the comment:) sure I will visit ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿผ

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  12. drainbrainx · June 16, 2017

    Love this. Fucking excellent…since fucking is excellent lol

    Liked by 1 person

    • Chrissy · June 17, 2017

      thank you lol

      Liked by 1 person

      • drainbrainx · June 19, 2017

        most fucking welcome ๐Ÿ˜€

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      • drainbrainx · June 19, 2017

        Hey if you wanna submit something to Dark Chaos feel free ๐Ÿ˜€

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      • Chrissy · June 19, 2017

        I will check out your blog! thanks so much

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      • drainbrainx · June 19, 2017

        Fucking sweet ๐Ÿ˜€

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      • Chrissy · June 19, 2017

        cool

        Liked by 1 person

      • drainbrainx · June 19, 2017

        It can be as fucking dark as you want it

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      • Chrissy · June 19, 2017

        Perfect does it have to be unpublished

        Liked by 1 person

      • drainbrainx · June 19, 2017

        Fuck no…. bring it… just let me know where it was before

        Liked by 1 person

      • Chrissy · June 19, 2017

        can you leave link here I clicked on yours and does not exist

        Liked by 1 person

      • drainbrainx · June 19, 2017

        fuck… that’s weird… it’s http://www.darkchaos96.wordpress.com

        Liked by 1 person

      • Chrissy · June 19, 2017

        followed

        Liked by 1 person

      • drainbrainx · June 19, 2017

        fuck yes…. thanks…. yeah I changed the address to this one….maybe that’s what was fucked up

        Liked by 1 person

      • Chrissy · June 19, 2017

        yup got it

        Liked by 1 person

      • drainbrainx · June 19, 2017

        sweet

        Liked by 1 person

      • drainbrainx · June 19, 2017

        ok just changed it … thx for letting me know

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      • drainbrainx · June 19, 2017

        were you ever a fan of Murderdolls? lol

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      • Chrissy · June 19, 2017

        you have thenewsbsurdistblog.wordpress.com as a link now

        Liked by 1 person

      • drainbrainx · June 19, 2017

        yeah…. that’s fucked…. i’ll go check it out see what’s wrong

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