poetry

Sonnet #2

Posted on by Chrissy

If ever anything was true for me

It was your vision I once dreamed about.

It is the way you arose from the sea,

and entered my life filled with more self-doubt.

The changing direction of the soft wind

you walked with a confidence I once knew,

and left your footprints wavering behind.

You spoke with a whisper the faint breeze blew.

If ever anything escaped my life,

it was the words you uttered that bleak day.

You might as well stab my heart with your knife

than abandon my ocean so far away.

I scraped my knees on the sand covered beach

crying out for a touch, kiss or a reach.

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7 comments

  1. dertalmid · April 14, 2015

    Very good

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  2. Jarrod C · April 14, 2015

    Ah such contrasting emotions Chrissy! Wonderful piece!

    Liked by 1 person

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    • Chrissy · April 14, 2015

      thank you Jarrod, appreciate the thoughtful comment x

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      Reply
  3. One among Many · April 14, 2015

    Twas great. I really liked lines one through fourteen. 🙂

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    • Chrissy · April 14, 2015

      pretty much covers the whole poem (lol) thank you for the sweet compliment –

      Liked by 1 person

      Reply
  4. Boinkaz · April 15, 2015

    Reblogged this on Boinkaz and commented:
    Reblogged from christinastrigas.wordpress.com

    Liked by 1 person

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