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Cryin’

December 11, 2014

Been crying internal bleeding

from wanting the streets

to be cleared from heartache

but the plow came too late

and my love it’s bound up in twisted fate-

feeling it all

then nothing.

What is wrong with me?

The snow is heavy

breaking my fall

wanting to lean up against your wall

so you could kiss me hard

feel my tears as I crawl

as close to you as I dream

in sweet sexy words

that invigorate my senses

as all these questions people ask me

fly right by me

crash into my sea.

I want to float above

but the tide keeps pulling me under

squeezing notes

living on false hopes

wishing that all this thunder

inside me would collide

with yours.

Wrote my last word

and finished the novel

haven’t you heard?

My lover is calling me again

wanting to know when

I will give it away

but he doesn’t know

that I already gave it

to you

a long time ago.

059

Christina Strigas

Comments:

22

      1. dertalmid says:

        Always a pleasure, love your stuff

  1. If the words “wrote my last word and finished the novel” have any literal meaning, a heartfelt congratulations to you! XX

    1. Chrissy says:

      Not really. Doing my first round of edits…book has been finished a long time ago! Thanks for peekong in:) will visit soon. Thanks again.

  2. [ Smiles ] Oh, this is another lovely piece of poetry.

    1. Chrissy says:

      Thanks Renard, (smiles back)!

  3. Jarrod C says:

    Great picture to add to the words!

    1. Chrissy says:

      I loved it as well

  4. linorobles says:

    Standing applause. .. Nice one of your lines reminded me of one of mines..
    I want to be so close to you
    that when you breathe
    I hear your future dreams…

    1. Chrissy says:

      Wow. Really blushing now. Thanks so much. Curtsy.

      1. linorobles says:

        The work speaks for itself. . ☺

    1. Chrissy says:

      Thank you beautiful!

  5. Loved the internal bleeding. This was perfect from beginning to end. Nice image at the end was the cherry on top.

    1. Chrissy says:

      That’s what it feels like sometimes. Like my tendonitis, you can’t see it, but it’s still bleeding. 🙁

  6. So stirring. Just lovely.

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